7 Things You Should NEVER Say in a Query
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There’s so much riding on your query letter. This is the first impression you will make on literary agents, and you want to ensure you come across as professional while also expressing the enthusiasm you have for your book. I’ve evaluated hundreds of query letters in my career, and I’ve seen authors make mistakes that inadvertently harm their credibility. In this video, I’m revealing seven of the biggest mistakes authors make in query letters, so you can avoid them and give yourself the best possible chances in the query trenches.
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7 THINGS TO NEVER SAY IN A QUERY:
01:37 – “My book is going to become a bestseller”
02:46 – “My novel is not yet complete, but…”
04:17 – “I’m willing to offer a higher commission rate”
05:45 – “I know the manuscript needs some work, but…”
06:41 – “I would love to speak over the phone or in person”
07:37 – “I’ve loved writing since a young age”
08:42 – “My friends and family have enjoyed this book”
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