Almost all IELTS candidates struggle to write a good essay. The most common challenges I see are poor structure and over-complicated grammar and vocabulary. When these two problems are combined, they can make an essay very hard to read!
You need to make life easy for yourself, and you need to make your essay easy for the examiner to read and understand!
In this video, I talk through how I would write a simple but effective Task 2 essay using a 'three-ideas' paragraph as taught by IELTS Simon.