I Analyze a Successful College Essay the Ivies LOVED (+ Why I Don't Like Emphasizing Ivies)
Ethan (College Essay Guy) reads a successful college essay paragraph by paragraph and analyzes exactly why it worked, an essay that helped its writer earn admission to top schools and scholarship offers.
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CHAPTERS
0:00 Introduction
0:30 Paragraph 1 + analysis
1:13 Paragraph 2 + analysis
2:31 Paragraph 3 + analysis
5:25 Paragraph 4 + analysis
10:05 Closing paragraph + analysis
11:35 Final thoughts
What you'll learn:
A full read of a real, successful college essay
A paragraph-by-paragraph analysis of why each part works
The specific writing moves that caught admissions readers' attention
What you can take from it for your own essay
Who this is for: students aiming for selective schools who want to see a winning essay dissected, and the counselors and parents supporting them.
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