In this video, I will be writing an analytical paragraph using some responses from Edexcel''s mark scheme as a starting point.
The extract is taken from the novel The Mill on the Floss by George Eliot.
In this extract Maggie is in a boat fighting against dangerous floodwaters to rescue her family from the mill where they live. She finds Tom, her brother, whom she loved as a child, but they have not had a good relationship for many years.
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00:13 Edexcel extract
00:42 Edexcel sample response
01:16 Language analysis
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