FNF Ashes and Double Kill with Lyrics (OLD AND UNFINISHED)
Just because I was bored, I decided to post two of the lyric videos from about a year ago that I never posted before. Note that I didn't bother trying to edit them that much because they're not the finished products.
Ashes is up first! I first started this draft on June 4th last year and the closest version to this was finished around October 8th. The lyrics had a good concept and the delivery was ok, but there were some parts that didn't flow really well with the rhythm, so overall, I'd rate it a 7/10 so far.
Double Kill was started on June 13th and finished the 16th, and it turned out... kinda bad... (mediocre at best). BF's lines were ok, but were a bit basic and seemed to pop out of nowhere. Most of White's lines were fine as well, but like with Maroon, they weren't that rhythmic. It was Black where I really screwed up. There were a bunch of overly abstract lines and didn't really seem to get to the point clearly (most likely because I forced rhymes where I didn't have to). With that being said, I'll probably rate it a 5/10.
Anyway, with that being said, I'll definitely remaster these lyrics! Ashes might not look TOO different since it was pretty good, but Double Kill might need a whole new rework.