Dinner Time (Full Game, No Commentary)
"This one definitely felt like someone's first time making a game. If it makes the developer feel any better, it wasn't the worst thing I played.
I would recommend you try doing some silent jumpscares. Loud noises that startles players are cheap. It also felt like the playable character didn't have a camera throughout the story. Spoiler alert, how did they tell their tale after they died? Did they become a ghost? I'm not that big of a fan of creepypastas that end in 'the writer was dead this whoooole tiiiiimmmme ooooOOOooo' tropes.
Overall, try not to bash this guy too much, we all suck at the beginning."
Get it: https://black-sand-studios.itch.io/di...
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